Self evaluation

In the most recent class assessment I found that there are a few areas of improvement within my essay. Most attention is needed in my AO2 than AO1, however improvement is needed in both categories. In order to improve my grade I need to ensure that my essay is portraying a balanced argument throughout; not just displaying one side of the argument. I also need to ensure I am including my own opinion of the topic, in relation to the points being made. Another thing I need to ensure I do when writing this question, is include more language levels at  more than basic level; for example talking about lexis, syntax, grammar, phonology, pragmatics, semantics etc. and drawing context relevant to the question using the language levels.